constructive criticism on video

Dear All,

I am trying to add more tutorial videos to my Youtube channel… I made
a short video for 10 tips on bird photography:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dyy3cW6rpLY

It is mainly aimed at beginners, so I expect it will be a little
elementary for most of the people on this list, but if you have a few
minutes, I would greatly appreciate any constructive criticism if you
think anything could be improved!

Bonus points if you can spot the two Australian birds in the video….

Thanks a lot,

Sincerely,
Jason